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Change "with blonde streaks" to "blonde streaks"
Change "dark hair had loose curls" to "dark, loose, blond-steaked curls"
Change "had loose curls" to "loose curls"
Change "loose curls and with blonde streaks" to "with loose curls and with blonde streaks"
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Remove "lying on the beach"
Change "an occasional run" to "running occasionally"
Change "plans" to "planning"
Change "swimming" to "a swim or two"
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Change "swings" to "is swinging"
Change "plays" to "is playing"
Change "swings" to "will be swinging"
Change "with power" to "powerfully"
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Change "a dog that barked at a cat" to "a dog barking at a cat"
Change "tried" to "was trying"
Change "Josie practicing the cello" to "Josie practiced the cello"
Change "to concentrate" to "concentrating"
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Change "to find a steady job" to "finding a steady job"
Change "to find a steady job during the day, to paint in the evenings" to "finding a steady job during the day, painting in the evenings"
Change "eventually that her paintings would sell" to "eventually to sell her paintings"
Change "Annie's hope" to "Annie was hoping"
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Change "clear" to "clearly"
Change "without a point" to "pointless"
Change "strongly worded" to "worded strongly"
Change "clear and strongly worded" to "easy to read"
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Change "to feed the puppy" to "the puppy needs fed"
Change "putting him in his crate at two" to "to put him in his crate at two"
Change "remember" to "be sure to remember"
Change "to feed the puppy at one and putting him in his crate at two" to "to feed the puppy and to put him in his crate at one and two"
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Change "a toy frog that jumped" to a "jumping frog"
Change "a big doll that talked" to "a big talking doll"
Change "a real yipping puppy" to "a yipping real puppy"
Change "a real yipping puppy" to "a puppy that yipped"
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Change "cooking the food" to "cooked the food"
Change "to time a meal" to "meal timing"
Change "to time a meal" to "timing a meal"
Change "is often harder" to "harder than"
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Change "to fulfill" to "fulfilled"
Change the present tense "is" to the past tense "was"
Change "Winning a scholarship" to "To win a scholarship"
Change "to fulfill it will not be easy" to "it will not be easy to fulfill"
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